The Crack

Yesterday
the wind blew open
a crack in the air

A smallish space
   so t'wd seem
squeezed just between 
the here and there.
 
‘Tis said 
   a good deed 
   an' a heartfelt prayer
can let one briefly stare
   into that space
where eyes may see
   yet 
not quite be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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April 19, 2023 at 9:40 PM
Warm greetings Sarah, I really enjoyed your poem entitled "The Crack" when this came through my email, after reading, I found myself re-reading a few times because I appreciated the express so much, it really spoke to me with such a fondness! It resonated with me and I enjoyed it very, Lady S*... "Great Convey!~" {SMILE}
Hind Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 12:44 PM
This was an interesting poem!
Jullion Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 7:50 PM
Thank you Paige! Thanks for the read and for taking time to comment. :}
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