The County Fair

The midway Barker sings his song 
Enticing fairgoers to part with their cash
Calliope music from the Merry-Go-Round 
Attracts children in a hurried dash

Where once grew grass now is mud 
Trampled beneath the frenzied mob
Sitting in rows of picnic tables 
Are neighbors enjoying their corn on the cob

Johnny throws baseballs at stacked milk bottles
Billy shoots at the metal shaped ducks
Sally is sticky from her cotton candy
Tommy wants to see the monster trucks

Becky displays her quilted blanket
Ann walks through the House of Mirrors
Tommy and Nancy ride the Ferris Wheel
Scooting a little bit nearer

And all alone, outside the stockyard barn
Rebecca sits with a tear in her eye
Holding the blue first-place ribbon
For the calf to whom she just said good-bye

Being voted the Best-In-Show
Is an honor no one else can share
But then having to let her Betsy go
Makes the County Fair seem not so fair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 6:33 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Lisa's "Unnamed County Fair"contest Joe. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 12:05 PM
uniquely scribed.. congrats on your fine win,joe!..:) huggs!
Kostman Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 12:00 PM
Congradulations On Your Well Deserved Win! Such a great poem! Jane XOXO
Johnson Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations for showing there is more to a county fair than the carnival and rides. Very well done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Williams Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 3:22 AM
Joe congrats on your win, love it..David
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 10:13 PM
love that play on words in the final line. It's so rewarding to see a poem finish with flair.
Bauer Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 6:36 PM
you've evoked all the sights, sounds and emotions of a country fair very well. nice one!
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