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The Cougar

I'm only in my twenties, but I really love this girl. She's all I ever think about. She's my baby, she's my world. Most people are ignorant. Some people just need to chill. They're jealous, how can they understand, if they're not feeling what I feel? Most say it will never work, but here we do it everyday. It's give and take, just like everything else. We work together and we play. We have fun together, we hardly fight, and our interests are the same. If that's not a good match, then please tell me what is! I think you're the one who's insane. We make each other happy! Isn't that what love is about? She makes me want to jump up and down. She makes me want to shout! Whould it be different if I were older then her? How does that make it right? Men can date younger girls, and nobody cares to fight? Well I don't care, I'm in love, and I will fight for this to last. She makes me feel on top of the world. I've never felt this in the past. This woman is sexy all around, and she has a heart of gold. She's wonderful, up and down, the greatest story I've ever told. So when you go out on the hunt, I recommend getting a cougar in your sights! The one I got has rocked my world, and made my future bright.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/22/2010 12:45:00 PM
enjoyed reading, congrats on the win!
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Date: 1/13/2010 9:22:00 PM
Interesting poem! Travis!Congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/13/2010 6:37:00 AM
Travis - many congratulations on your wonderful winning poem. Rgds Janette
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Date: 1/12/2010 9:03:00 AM
Dear Travis, Sounds like a guy in love to me. Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest. Lainie
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Date: 12/13/2009 3:09:00 AM
inspiring and passionate write. follow the woman of your dreams! you sure hit the right the lady travis, follow your instincts and heart. love, sami.
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