The Coug

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        Have you ever heard the phrase:
"The older the bear, the sweeter the juice"

             I can't help but stare,
            at this stunning cougar,
             with long auburn hair.



Jared Pickett
12/11/09
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Charmaine Chircop

March 1, 2010 at 7:15 AM

Im not an old bear,so i guess i'm sour:)..I heard something similiar..i have to check and then tell you:)..Lovely sweet poem..mood lifter..Charma

Linda Terrell

February 17, 2010 at 11:52 AM

Good one! But when are bears and cougars compaired to women? Lusting love compared to animal tendentices very creative! Keep up the good writtings.

Sara Kendrick

December 17, 2009 at 2:41 PM

I have never heard that one either. I suppose that you are refering to a woman who has auburn hair with a cougar attitude in the rest of the write. Keep the creative and descriptive pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

John Freeman

December 17, 2009 at 9:43 AM

No never heard that one, Jared. But sounds like a real cougar, figure. Smile, Sincerely, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 17, 2009 at 8:58 AM

Not as good as human contact but Soup Fam is good for communication... I won't be home or I'd invite u over my house.. u are not that far from me... right down or up 95 right?...lets not let this happen again... if u know u are going to be alone..mention it beforehand and we'll get it together... no one should be all alone... OK? "Sweetie"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 17, 2009 at 8:52 AM

Hey .. like your comments today on my new postings... I can't wait to check out the bods of the "boy toys" soon as Summer arrives... I am off to the beach .... in a flash... glad u enjoyed this write... blessings... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Mary Meade Stephenson

December 16, 2009 at 5:38 PM

Short and straight to the point....vivid imagery...wonderful job! Thanks so much for sharing~Mary

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 16, 2009 at 1:58 PM

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 15, 2009 at 5:53 PM

Coug got u by the tail .. or by the tongue.. u OK Lone Wolf?... have not seen any postings from u in more than a few.... what gives? luv.. "Sweetie"..

Richard Pickett

December 13, 2009 at 5:08 AM

Roarrrrrr...Into Cougars are you Son....I like this one, It proves that the sword is not as mighty as the pen....Well done...Dad

Marty Owens

December 12, 2009 at 1:33 PM

Very nice Jared...Marty

Daver Austin

December 12, 2009 at 7:27 AM

This is almost a haiku. Whatever, I like it mucho! Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 11, 2009 at 1:41 PM

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 11, 2009 at 12:53 PM

She must be a real beauty to catch your eye... great words here to read... I have heard a similar expression... nothing takes the place of an "older" coug's experience... keep that in mind... "Sweetheart" with blessings ... luv... NEW SOUP MAIL...

The Coug

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