The Cottage In the Blooms

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The cottage near the wood is crowded in blooms, Its creamy facade is enlivened with many hues; And large vases of flowers grace several rooms. Joy throughout the days with the delicate fumes, and legendary exotic, natural splendor issues. The cottage near the wood is crowded in blooms. Redbirds sing gold sunshine, or of pearly moons, Nature creates beautiful at the merest excuse, And large vases of flowers grace several rooms. Summer appears early, in all the mellow Junes. Blue and mauve butterflies flit floral avenues. The cottage near the wood is crowded in blooms. In such lively colors, encroaching beauty looms, Green scenes in each window, sunshine suffused, And large vases of flowers grace several rooms. All the endless days bold tangerine sun looms, and rabbits and the bees gather woodland news. The cottage near the wood is crowded in blooms; And large vases of flowers grace several rooms

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Emilia James

Date: 8/2/2021 10:03:00 AM

Outstanding and so beautiful. I felt I was floating in the beauty of your words. A fav for me, Emilia : )

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/2/2021 10:11:00 AM

Thank you so much, Emilia. I am truly honored. Blessings, Evelyn :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/2/2021 9:49:00 AM

WoW! Evelyn, You always paint such gorgeous pictures with words. I said it before; you are like a painter of words. You create good imagery that leaps off the page. I am a fan and viewing you is always a good experience. Excellent job:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/2/2021 10:09:00 AM

Thank you with all my heart, dear Alexis, for all of your kind, glowing remarks. It's so rewarding to have such appreciation. I'm touched that you're a fan, and you must know that I am one of yours as well. Your poetry is awesome. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn :)

Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/2/2021 3:02:00 AM

I am sure God created you, Eve, as his messager to remind us all of the things He created, nothing misses your eye, then to protray all of this within your poems to open our eyes to what we would otherwise miss, your vividness of colours, scents, sounds and feelings are all conveyed to the reader, now you blow us all away with such a beautiful written Villanelle, God; I feel, chose you well, Eve, blessings my friend . . . : )

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/2/2021 10:20:00 AM

I am very touched by all of the kind things you had to say, Indiana. Thank you very much for the wonderful compliments and expressions of appreciation. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/2/2021 2:15:00 AM

Brilliant poem. How I wish I could have so many flowers in my house. Splendid. You are the queen of nature.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/2/2021 10:26:00 AM

You are always impacting me, Victor. After I read your villanelle, recently, I wanted to try writing one myself. This is my first villanelle. Thank you very much for the kind compliments. Blessings and hugs. :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/1/2021 11:48:00 PM

to be surrounded with such a scene is beautiful, to convey it to the reader, where one is taken there, is magical.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/2/2021 10:28:00 AM

Thank you for your warm appreciation, and the wonderful, happy thoughts, Harry. :D