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Times have changed so much since my youth. I'm sure there are still some country stores around, but most have gone the way of drive-in movies and drive-in hang-outs of the past.

The Cotney Country Store

The Cotney Country Store
By Franklin Price
07/24/2020

A mile north on Merritt Island
Maybe less or maybe more
A local landmark, I recall,
Was a little Country Store

Mister Cotney built it
Was no carpenter for sure
Brought a service to the area
Helped the poor folks to endure

The economy was citrus
People lived from day to day
Cotney extended credit
When there were no bucks to pay

He kept a written ledger
A tab for every needy name
Living one day to another
Was how many played the game

Those who had so little
Mostly honest way back then
When pay day came, the tab was paid
Making Cotney whole again

The store provided products
Mostly basics, yet some cheer
Candy bars and cold drinks
Along with cigarettes and beer

As kids we went there often
Returning bottles we had found
People threw them from their cars
We found them on the ground

Were worth a couple cents a piece
Cotney paid us every time
We purchased candy for a penny
And a drink was but a dime

Those days have long been gone
No drink deposits any more
Convenience stores have taken over
There's no Cotney Country Store.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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