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The Cotillion Ball

The red gown rustles touched by the breeze
Fall's chilly rain drops drip with ease  

Sponsor: Rick Parise
Contest: Crystalline
Theme:Autumn Oak

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2014

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/29/2014 9:57:00 PM simply stunning Sara.. :)! Login to Reply

Faye Gibson Date: 11/28/2014 9:52:00 AM Beautiful word picture, Sara. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Reason A. Poteet Date: 11/27/2014 9:45:00 AM A beautiful crystalline, Sara, you picture what I have heard many times from my neighbor's big oak in the wind. A few weeks ago, I got caught in a rainstorm while walking and called my husband to come get me. I took shelter under a huge oak tree and scarcely got wet at all. Gorgeous pictur e. Login to Reply

Hija De La Luna Date: 11/25/2014 4:37:00 AM Back to say my Congratulations, Sara! Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:04:00 PM Magnificent Sara. I love that clever first line. Definitely a 7. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/24/2014 9:45:00 AM Lovely lines, Sara...congrats!! :)) Login to Reply

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 11/24/2014 9:32:00 AM Sara it's delightful...chilly rain drops drip with ease yes I can imagine. Love > congrats >>>rajat Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 11/24/2014 9:11:00 AM Lovely imagery, Sara; I am reminded of an elegant dance gown. // paul Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 11/24/2014 8:31:00 AM In a few words you have captured the beauty. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/23/2014 10:24:00 PM Hey, BIG congrats to you, sweetie!! Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 11/23/2014 3:41:00 PM Very nice imagery, Sara. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 11/23/2014 1:40:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Sara,so delighted that the judge saw this beauty...huggs Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/23/2014 11:54:00 AM lovely to read it again - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 11/23/2014 9:14:00 AM A very poetic take on autumn, dear Sara! GL XXXX Login to Reply

Ken Carroll Date: 11/22/2014 11:41:00 PM Wonderful imagery Sara! Login to Reply

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 11/22/2014 10:46:00 PM I love this Sara,goodluck in the contest...huggs Login to Reply

Hija De La Luna Date: 11/22/2014 8:20:00 PM i love the imagery, Sara! glad to have read this today! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/22/2014 8:10:00 PM Love how you made it a cotillion!!! I was wondering why it was about a ball and not oak trees when I saw you did a crystalline and now I see it was symbolic! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/22/2014 1:08:00 PM the wind has to tell as it moves softly in mind...lovely write, sara... huggs Login to Reply

Cindy Cayton Date: 11/22/2014 1:04:00 PM Nice lines Sara.. In Re: to your Com to kissed by life itself. I had to leave a message for my true that professed his truth in love in front of our circle here at the soup. Only to leave then as to not to disrespect me with innuendos with the other lady writers, you know him as our dear John Rhinem :) Eight years Sara! Wow... Take care, if you want to see some of my stuff that hits the magazine you may want to read, The Day Light, or perhaps he and I's 7 year anniversary, he wrote me 1 too. :( Login to Reply

Sandip Goswami Date: 11/22/2014 12:27:00 PM Beautiful image... Brain storming thoughts....Thank you very much...Best wishes from India... Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/22/2014 11:13:00 AM beautifully penned - great imagery:-) good luck! Hugs jan xx Login to Reply

David Meade Date: 11/22/2014 10:47:00 AM What a great image -- and it's raining here. Login to Reply