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Painting: "Eternal Start"   by Eva Volf

 

 

The Continuum of Time, Nature, Poetry, and Love
Just as the ocean’s continuous motion, and sands ever shifting in time; constant the clicking of clock’s endless ticking; this poet’s perpetual rhyme. Sure as the morning with sunrise adorning, and crocus that blooms in the spring; days softly humming with nature’s forthcoming, this mirth makes the mockingbird sing. Dreams keep amassing as time keeps on passing, these reveries seen in my mind. With seasons contrasting this beauty is lasting that nature forever designed. Sure as this portraiture beauty of nature in springtime when life starts anew; like nature’s endeavor and lasting forever, this love in my heart felt for you.
July 7, 2019

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Date: 8/10/2019 8:23:00 PM
John, I was captivated by the breathtaking beauty, lilting rhythm and elegant rhymes (internal as well) of your masterwork of poetry. An expressive gem. Congratulations on your wonderful win, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/11/2019 2:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, I always appreciate your wonderful warm comments. My best to you my friend. John
Date: 8/10/2019 6:23:00 PM
This is masterful John, I am always drawn to your writing and this one too is a special write congrats on a well deserved win!
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John Gondolf
Date: 8/11/2019 6:48:00 AM
Thanks, John, I appreciate the kind words. Thanks for hosting the contest. John
Date: 7/11/2019 8:35:00 AM
I like the rhythmic flow of this piece. Also the hopeful message.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/11/2019 8:57:00 AM
Thank you, Richard, I appreciate your kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. John
Date: 7/10/2019 2:33:00 PM
Wonderful poetry. So melodic and rhythmic like the waves of the sea!
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Date: 7/10/2019 5:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, I appreciate your kind words and comments. John
Date: 7/10/2019 6:47:00 AM
this one has the ebb and flow of the ocean and rolls right along....beautifully done my friend! hugs :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/10/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thank you, Sandy. There is something about the calm and serenity of the waves that endlessly roll in and lap the shore, I think you and I are both drawn to the ocean. All my best to you. Hugs, John
Date: 7/9/2019 5:05:00 PM
your artwords combining the elements of time, nature, love, and poetry illuminate my soul.. lovely, john... huggs
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/9/2019 5:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette, I'm glad I could illuminate your soul this afternoon, I wouldn't want you stumbling around in the dark. Hugs, John
Date: 7/8/2019 12:55:00 AM
A medley of experiences and emotions, a recipe for love through the medium of nature - which brings you everlasting, heartfelt love. Beautiful John! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/8/2019 4:47:00 AM
Thank you, Jenn, I always appreciate hearing your thoughts and comments. I appreciate you. All my best. John
Date: 7/7/2019 5:44:00 PM
Life, love and poetry all collide into one. It is truly amazing, and you have tangled them perfectly together- within this beautiful masterpiece. Nature being compared to love overflowing within the heart. Simply breathtaking my dear sweet friend. :) Brandy
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Date: 7/7/2019 7:01:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughts my sweet friend. Time, nature, poetry, and love are all endless. I appreciate you and your thoughts, B. John
Date: 7/7/2019 10:03:00 AM
Beautiful rhythm and rhyme John , it just rolled off the tongue.enjoyed. Tom
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John Gondolf
Date: 7/7/2019 12:26:00 PM
Thanks, Tom, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John

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