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The Consciousness

With every tick of the clock And the door's suspense Sometimes a great knock and the consciousness grows Like a red rose Slowly, Softly, Silently Timidly, Taciturnly, Terrified Hesitantly, Slyly, Wisely In eta into an enormous not extinguishable hearth Called the soul That burns unexhausted------- Absorbs, Acclimatises, Accentuated And adheres to it for a short long time Till the appointed moment To escape into another life Of stringent struggle and strife Yet with another tick It becomes saturated sick Still assumes another form Totally different, fully divergent No past recollections, repentance of sentiments Gathers, Collects, Shares Enjoys, Repines, Bears Stays, Dissolves, Sublimes Growth, decadence, degradation with the time. The Consciousness WRITTEN FOR THE INTERNATIONAL POETRYSOUP CONTEST

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Date: 8/2/2011 7:47:00 AM
Wow, this is truly a unique poem. I don't recall reading any on this subject, in fact. I loved how you were able to describe things not only with images but also with verbs... "stays, dissolves, sublimes.." LOVED IT! I will surely be checking out more of your work dear :) God bless
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Gargi Saha
Date: 8/3/2011 4:49:00 AM
Dear Ms Kaabour, Thanks a lot for your kind comments on my poem 'The Consciousness'.

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