The Conscious Child

Twinkling through the traumas of thoughtful life
 I feel like a child wishing that mother's meeting
 BAG and biscuits will only be mine 
And as my hollow portion. 
Yet my small mind's eye rejects wishfully 
My siblings presence aiming to drag all 
And run away while my fear for cane pull me 
Back to calmness as desire and hunger becomes 
My rivalry So i wished again i had become 
A teenager but no gravity of hope
Could boost my growth nor the fertilizers of Imagination can change my height
As i sit duly in childly assumptions 
Beside my mother to learn togetherness
Of family habits With her usual sayings of together we build but united we stand as an ant hill of time....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 6/24/2019 8:40:00 AM
You are a thoughtful writer. I very much enjoyed my visit this morning.
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Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu
Date: 6/24/2019 1:44:00 PM
You awesomely welcomed Richard, poetry hugs.
Date: 6/2/2019 4:35:00 PM
Great poem my friend..
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Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu
Date: 6/2/2019 4:42:00 PM
Thank you Silent One, for your visit and comment.
Date: 6/1/2019 2:17:00 AM
What a great poem! Some of us meet our true nature or selves then. But it is brainwashed out of it. You, found and kept yours How great, Panagiota
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Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu
Date: 6/1/2019 3:44:00 AM
Yeah Panagiota, thank you for your comment.
Date: 5/12/2019 1:43:00 PM
Okonkwo - what a beautiful poem written as an adult but penned through the eyes of a very thoughtful child - wonderfully write! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Okonkwo Ifeanyichukwu
Date: 5/13/2019 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer, I look into my childhood years to see how I was then as to accept my self now.
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