The Congregants Pray

the congregants pray lids lap over iris tides - hides laudatory shadows 5/22/2023

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/24/2023 9:34:00 PM

'lids lap over iris tides' is sooooooooooo poetic!! My gosh! Sigh! So many possibilities there! Bravo, gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2023 4:54:00 AM

Thank you so much! It is cool what God shows us. For years praising the Lord then I happen to look down and see the praising shadows on the floor. Reminds me of Psalm 91 verse 1 - we who live under the protection of the Most High, dwell in the shadow of the Almighty. God bless you, Gershon!

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/23/2023 11:11:00 AM

Applauding the lauding here Kim, Concise and captivating, i deleted the Poem you commented on and your comment Went as well.' I hope things are good for you."

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2023 11:58:00 AM

Thank you, Joe!

Valsa George

Date: 5/22/2023 8:43:00 PM

Beautiful senryu. When the congregation chants laudatory praises, God will be there.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2023 6:27:00 AM

Thank you, dear lady!