Paul Callus Poet Verse

The Composer

Eyes closed he hums the melody

replaying in his mind each note 

in search of fitting instruments.


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Image no. 3
Paul Callus ~ 3rd January 2015
Contest: 3 by 8 image
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Placed: 3rd

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Quoth Theraven June 19, 2021 at 2:36 PM Paul, Showed us all too well how the Composer finds the note's best voice. -Richard Paul Callus June 22, 2021 at 8:02 AM I hope I did the composer justice, Richard :) Thank 6you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Robert Nehls February 13, 2015 at 8:37 AM Hi Paul. Composers are like poets, always searching for the right rhythm, the right word to fit into that rhythm. Short but very profound and full of so many images in the mind. Very nice, my friend.... Robert. Paul Callus February 13, 2015 at 1:28 PM Your insightful remarks are appreciated, Robert. Thank you for stopping by. Have a nice weekend. // paul

Nathan D. January 31, 2015 at 4:36 PM Now I want to know if he ever finds one. Cool poem Paul Callus January 31, 2015 at 4:39 PM Hopefully he will, Nathan, otherwise the music will never go public! Thanks for stopping by. // paul

Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2015 at 11:43 PM Paul, thank you for the sweet reply... again

Dorian Petersen Potter January 13, 2015 at 10:59 AM Very nice pen Paul! Enjoyed Your Composer piece my dearest friend. fantastic imagery ! A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxx D.^0^ Paul Callus January 13, 2015 at 11:37 AM Thank you dear Dorian! Your ratings and comments are always very encouraging. So glad you enjoyed my composer! hugs // paul

Cona Adams January 12, 2015 at 9:19 AM WOW. And, when it jells . . . the first note sounds . . . the feet start tapping! Paul Callus January 12, 2015 at 11:15 AM Hi Cona...I have always admired (and envied) composers for what they are able to create...but perhaps they think of us poets on similar lines! // paul

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2015 at 9:44 PM pAUL,, congratulations on your AWESOME win, LINDA Paul Callus January 12, 2015 at 2:02 AM Thank you Linda; lovely visit this morning!:) All the best! // paul

Kelly Deschler January 10, 2015 at 2:53 PM This brings back good memories of playing in the high school marching band. It was so much fun and I really miss it a lot... I loved your brilliant interpretation of image #3. Congrats on a well deserved win, Paul! Paul Callus January 10, 2015 at 4:09 PM This is the beauty of poetry...it can take us along for a ride, the merrier the better! Thank you for enjoying the interpretation, Kelly. Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos January 9, 2015 at 8:40 AM WOW, Paul, this is a winner from beginning to end. I have known musicians who go through this process, and you nailed it in this beauty! Congratulations on a wonderful win, my friend! Pandita. Paul Callus January 9, 2015 at 2:59 PM Your comments are music to the ears...you compose well, Pandita! Thank you and have a lovely weekend. hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick January 9, 2015 at 8:39 AM Interesting work..Way to go ...Congrats on your big win..Sara Paul Callus January 9, 2015 at 2:57 PM Thank you Sara. Hope you'll have a lovely weekend. // paul

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2015 at 10:28 PM glad to see this high on the list. Congrats, Paul. Paul Callus January 9, 2015 at 7:59 AM Thank you Andrea; your balloon one was one of the best entries. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 8, 2015 at 5:30 AM congratz Paul! I know this will place high.. :)! Paul Callus January 8, 2015 at 10:15 AM Thank you Olive_eloi! You are always close to the mark. Yours, if entered, would have also been a winner. hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong January 8, 2015 at 2:12 AM Back to say congrats on your win Paul. I knew this was a great entry! Paul Callus January 8, 2015 at 10:12 AM Thank you for returning with congrats, Connie...and for the faith you had in it from the start! I'm very pleased for your no 1 spot! // paul

Casarah Nance January 7, 2015 at 3:46 PM Great ! perfect to the picture, bravo. Grats on your win ;) Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 4:30 PM Thank you Casarah; always so lovely to have you stopping by:) // paul

Jan Allison January 7, 2015 at 2:01 PM Dropping back with my congrats Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx Jan Allison January 7, 2015 at 2:50 PM Yes I managed to make this one - was delighted to be placed:-) Hugs jan xx Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 2:08 PM Thank you Jan; lovely to be on the same winners' list with you. hugs // paul

Maurice Yvonne January 7, 2015 at 10:36 AM Congratulations Paul on your win with this fine write. Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 2:07 PM Once again, thank you Armand. [...got to know where the names Maurice and Yvonne came from...very interesting!] // paul

Harry Horsman January 7, 2015 at 9:36 AM I agree with Eileen's comment, you are your poetry..the vision the creation,,,,, Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 2:28 PM Many thanks Harry...both you and Eileen are very kind and appreciative! // paul

Nette Onclaud January 7, 2015 at 9:07 AM the delicate creative process of designing something from vignettes of the mind is so well implied here, paul... thanks for lighting my contest and big congrats Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 1:22 PM I'm honoured to be on your winners' list once again, Nette! It means a lot to me...same as the encouraging comments that you have posted here. Thank you!! // paul

Kayod5 Kayode January 7, 2015 at 9:01 AM A Poem written in hurry,has coasted home with victory,that speaks volume about the poet' s talents. Congrats Paul...huggs Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 1:58 PM Written in a hurry, yes, but I did rush back to retouch!:) Kayode, you're a critic after my heart!! ...you comment with a smile on your face:) hugs // paul

Barbara Gorelick January 7, 2015 at 8:55 AM LIke your take on the pic I chose s well. Congrats to you dear. BG Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 2:00 PM I'm pleased you found my composer's efforts to your liking, Barbara! Thank you!! // paul

Sandra Haight January 7, 2015 at 8:49 AM Paul, what a wonderful vision and story you created with your poem based on that image! I love it! Congratulations on your win!! Sandra Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 1:42 PM Thank you Sandra; I too was impressed by your lovely 'gift' of words! Pleased that you saw creativity in my effort. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta January 7, 2015 at 8:31 AM Lovely take on the theme of the picture, congrats on the win, Paul Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 1:38 PM Pleased that you like it Dr! Thanks for stopping by with congrats. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 7, 2015 at 4:24 AM Thats so lovely Paul! Loved the read much, congrats on big win! Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 1:33 PM I always enjoy your lovely visits, Upma; glad that you like my composer! Take care. // paul

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 7, 2015 at 3:52 AM Congratulations Paul. Love & Regards> your friend Rajat Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 1:36 PM Thank you Rajat....pleased to be on the same winning list with you! your friend....paul

Emile Pinet January 6, 2015 at 7:27 PM This poem has very good flow and imagery and it was my pleasure to read and review...Emile Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 1:19 PM Hi Emile...pleased to meet you here, and thank you for your lovely comments. // paul

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