The Comfort

Nothing quite effectively states the comfort of
A well-worn jacket with that perfect smell
A sunny day with the rich aroma of soil
And a hammock
Surrounded by the nothingness
Of doing nothing
Of just enjoying the moment 
Bare feet, warm skin
A cool breeze playing through my hair 
I feel inclined to stay here forever
Nothing quite compares 
To sweet simplicity in comfort
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Michael Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 6:40 AM
Peace...inner and outer...A relaxing poem indeed...All the best
Pandit Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 5:44 AM
A comforting feel to your poem..well said Elena.
Blanca Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:19 PM
Good for you Elena. One's outer life should reflect one's inner spiritual wealth.
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