The Color Purplish

The man on the porch looks out
over his property and towards his daughter.
Nervousness seeps through her plum-dark flesh.
Each eye contact signposts a wicked meditation.
Women are voiceless in those days, yielding to
males and manipulated Bible verses.
Poverty and childbirth loiters the screen.
White men protect segregation and Black men protect pride.
Are there no advocates or women’s lib
in that part of the South? Does anyone care about the mistreated?
Even the animals are sinister, and the young babes.
Horses burdened with stuff amble the pasture.
Fried ham wafts from kerosene stoves.
All the outspoken women are rebellious and prostitutes.
They wear thigh-high skirts, halters, and ruddy rouge.
Men swagger about in cut-price suits, wingtips, and thin-band ties.
They sweat into juke-joints or atop a squeaky bedframe
while records scratch against a dusty needle.
The girl in the front yard runs through hanging sheets
and swings bound books against Mister’s groin.
Her eyes are watery, her hair wild as those purple flowers.
She peers down at her attacker twisted on the red clay
and she shrieks.
Nobody shows up to save her.
She runs off into nothing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 10:27 AM
Hi Nikkia, lovely win....SKAT
Roberts Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:40 AM
And you're a lovely person! Thanks SKAT A! :-)
Gibson Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 3:58 PM
Congratulations on this win...great writing. Love the bold descriptiveness.
Roberts Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:41 AM
I appreciate your feedback, Faye. Thanks so much.
Mehta Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 4:59 AM
Congrats on the win and thanks for sharing this colorful poem,
Roberts Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 8:48 AM
Dr. Ram, you inspire me to do my best. Thanks.
A   Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 1:30 AM
nice win Nikkia, xox..PD
Roberts Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 8:48 AM
XOXOXOOXOXOXOXO Sending my gratitude and much love.....Thanks!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 11:25 PM
Great imagery and so is the poem Nikkia,,wonderful,,loved it,,congrats on grat win !
Roberts Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 8:47 AM
Dr. Upma! Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 8:27 PM
I agree with both Deb here on the lines that she liked most and with Charlotte on how vivid and gritty this was. I don't really understand the poem's ending. I can imagine two or three things but not sure which one you had in your mind. Besides that, I loved the imagery and really enjoyed your poem. Congrats on your win.
Roberts Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 8:47 AM
Hi Andrea! Thanks for your great feedback. ;)
Guzzi Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 4:36 PM
Powerful, masterful and true verse, fav lines [her plum-dark flesh][Fried ham wafts from kerosene stoves][her hair wild as those purple flowers] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Roberts Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 8:44 AM
Debbie, your words are deposited in my spirit. Much to grow on. Thank you!
Puddifoot Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 4:11 PM
this poem was destined to be a winner! the contest had closed but unknown to me someone must've withdrawn their entry bc it reopened, and you just sneaked this one in - and I'm so glad you did! I read the first seven lines and put it straight through...gritty, harsh reality, the color purple in poetic form..."records scratch against a dusty needle" - superb! I've read a couple of your other poems and was equally impressed...congrats on your 1st place win in my contest :)
Roberts Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Great! Thanks, Charlotte! I'm honored to even be counted among such great poets in this community. Thanks for providing this opportunity. To all good things! :)
Kos Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 3:59 PM
You have painted a picture with words. Very properly transmitted words. congrats on your win!!
Roberts Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 4:02 PM
Thank you so much. We are all winners! :-)
Walker  Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 3:41 PM
Nikkia, congratulations on placing first in the contest of Colors.. Verlena
Roberts Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 4:06 PM
Thanks, Verlena! So good to be in this wonderful community of artists.
Callus Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 3:28 PM
You have an ability to paint a living picture with such ease. Most enjoyable. congrats on a worthy win. // paul
Roberts Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 4:07 PM
Paul, you are so kind. Thank you and I do look forward to reading more of your own stellar work. :)
Nance Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 3:04 PM
grats on your first place win!:)
Roberts Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 4:07 PM
Casarah, daughter of the best ink, write on! :)
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