The Color of Space

The   Color of Space

His spaceship alit on a foreign word
deep in the midst of the outer space
Two moons gazing down devoid of all air
He put his mask on and walked down to the plank
Opened the door to retreat from the hull

He was there for a purpose
for diplomacy’s sake
To seek a new race and find a new place
In hopes he could trade as the Earth needed more
An avatar sought for the future of lore

The leader approached, his habiliment WHITE
a clean crisp collar and his face a pale GREEN
Exacting his speech with power and grace

I promise the cargo that you request
In the time it is due it will be our best
For our BLUE men will work as I command
To produce what you need or they’ll be replaced
And another blue man will fill in the space
To satisfy your monthly needs

He gazed at the workers bedraggled in sweat
Thier uniforms worn not a word from their lips
He considered his quest and returned to his ship

He removed his mask staring out of the hull
He pondered the planet that he will leave 
An Alien world and the stigma remains
He grabbed a BLACK towel and wiped his BROWN face
Set course to return no more to explore
And boldly leave where he had been before

To boldly go where no poet has gone before Contest
Sponsored by The Seeker , August 31, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sergi Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 2:37 PM
Hi Pat: I was a sci fi fan and I read this story in an old comic book when segregation was alive and well. Can you imagine if we settle in another planet bigotry will still exist?
Cresswell Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Some times we (including) who ever lives beyond are more alike than we realize. Hoe depressing!
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 8:46 PM
that is cool how you got in so many colors in it. I see it's a win! BIG congrats, Ralph
Cresswell Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Ralph:-) hugs jan xx
Dalei Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Well written. Good luck & best wishes for the contest. Enjoyed.........//:) hugs
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 1:57 PM
I love star trek and this was a great colourful sci fi write Ralph:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 9:06 AM
Thanks for the visit Ralph.
Vaso Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 9:55 PM
Hi Ralph, this is great, love the take on it!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 3:08 PM
All colors meld and working together for one cause. I like the idea behind this Ralph. Best of luck in the contest! 7 : )
Bateman Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 10:34 AM
Ralph, A quite excellent write here for sure!! Shades of Spock and James Tiberius Kirk. Best of Luck in the contest!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Sergi Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Hi Gary: Good to hear from you. Thank you for the comment. Email if you perceived the message
Lamoureux Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 10:59 PM
Ha ha, this is fun Ralph. I'm a Star Trek fan so space stuff is right up my alley.
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