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The Collie She'D Heard Of

Alone in the forest at the mercy of sound no lean-to for shelter, nor bed of leaves on the ground wind cracks through the brambles rain’s icy fingers reach in to magnify doubts and concerns of faraway kith, distant kin when of a sudden the collie she’d heard of appeared nuzzled up to her and with that ~ disappeared October 03, 2022 Entry in 'A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Contest'

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Date: 10/5/2022 8:55:00 PM
Alas, when did the lassie last see Lassie? Doggone, I wanted more…
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2022 8:57:00 PM
Oh! Good!... I really wanted you, the reader, to be left hanging, wanting more. If you're serious about your 'Doggone' there, you've made my night. Thank you, Jeff!! :) gw
Date: 10/4/2022 1:01:00 PM
ewww... i love this. gave me the chills for some reason. Nicely done!!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2022 8:58:00 PM
Maybe because I left a window open on my computer when I was typing it. (Groan!) ~ Another 'Dad'-joke
Date: 10/4/2022 8:16:00 AM
A touchy-felly write with an eerie touch. I have goose bumps. :) Linda
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2022 8:58:00 PM
Ooh. And I have just the remedy for goose bumps, Linda. ~ Gander
Date: 10/4/2022 8:14:00 AM
Wow! Another scary, strange happening. A proliferation of these kinds of things as we approach Halloween. I suppose you had to see it to believe it!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2022 9:00:00 PM
Yes, it sure seems that Halloween is in the air.
Date: 10/4/2022 7:38:00 AM
Ahh!!! Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent there. Sara
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2022 9:01:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. Always a pleasure to read your kind words and to take in your 'attitude of gratitude.' ~ Kindness and Caring, Gershon
Date: 10/4/2022 6:21:00 AM
Gershon. This is terrific in its storytelling and imagery , so sweet! A canine to cuddle, calamity cure!! Good luck in the contest for sure! Happy Tuesday!
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Date: 10/3/2022 10:57:00 PM
Collies are great. I have one named Tavi. Very smart and loveable. Nice to see this Poetry this late morning Gershon... Your up late 1:55am in NY Chicago is late also. We are two nutty writers...
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