The Cold Hours

There's too many hours in the day and I looked to you for the answers 
but you had no soul and there was a hole in me so all my questions went unanswered.
And the night presses on in a dreary haze there was so many things I wanted to say about all the ways I'm disappearing every day.
Your distant daze told me to walk away but I'm just to weak to walk away
and we'll sit here and fade in millions of different ways as the light changes to a cold dead day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Truly Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 5:10 PM
Totally sunk me agin with this one. I read this one like 5 times just feeling myself being a part of it. Thanks for the good read Jamie :) Much love -Yours Truly
Anderson Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 5:24 PM
Thanks so much for all the comments I really like all your writing to it speaks to me
Hunter Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 1:36 PM
Pain sometimes makes its way to our paper...sometimes it has to. Well done...Caleb
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