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The Cold, Cold Night

The days drag by day by day And the only thing I can say, Is I hope you're still thinking my way. As I lay and think all day and night, About you and our perfect night. It went by so fast, a blink of an eye, While I shot out all those corny lines. You're smile never seemed to fade, As we stared into the night amazed. The stars were as bright as you're eyes And the air was so cold we almost died. But we snuggled close to stay alive, And we never really seemed to mind. How cold it was because you see, We never had such great shivers in our knees. -Eddie Cox

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/22/2010 10:59:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Eddie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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