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The Coal In the Flame

the coal in the flames lights up with regret that it never got the chance to become a diamond. the ashes of the wood twinkle with dying embers knowing that this is the closest thing they have to a life. the smoke glides over the dust of what once was that was taken by the flames.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/6/2019 3:58:00 AM
Great write Astrid
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Date: 9/4/2019 2:13:00 PM
Another very nicely expressed poem. I like your vision in these things. Really cool.
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