The Clouds Showed Me

The  clouds showed me
something so different
Two long thin lines


Followed by two x's
I was surprised
Two kisses by Mother
       nature
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Wolf Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 5:21 PM
You got a glimpse of what the clouds do when they think we humans are not watching! lol. Nice one, Darlene! Cheers, Gershon
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 5:38 AM
Hello Gershon, Yes I did.Thank you Gershon. Cheers!!
Gentile Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 7:26 AM
Mother Natures kisses are so special Darlene as is your lovely poem, Happy Sunday!!!
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 10:16 AM
Hello Mike, I was so surprised to see this in the clouds. Oh thank you for the lovely comment, Happy Sunday.
Sands Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 12:59 PM
I love watching the sky and clouds. This is perfect Darlene :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 3:18 PM
Hello Heidi, I also enjoy to watch the clouds and the sky. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs.
Jayasankar Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 8:01 AM
So well penned and so beautifully crafted with words... creating lovely imagery for the reader dear Darlene... Hugs... ~ Ani
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Hello Anitha, I look up to the clouds to see the shapes and the shapes are always different. Hugs Darlene
Shaw Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 11:28 AM
I love reading the clouds, Darlene, this is indeed a lucky omen . . . : )
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Hello Indiana, I reead the clouds every chance I get. there is always something different in clouds to see. Blessings.
Roper Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 11:12 AM
Beautiful imagery created in your creative words , Darlene, I love it.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 12:09 PM
Hello Eve, i always watch the clouds. i always see something different. Hugs.
Cornish Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 12:44 PM
Wonderful Darlene - I too have often looked at clouds and seen within them a message or shape - but then - that is the eye of a poet not put to waste.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 3:41 PM
Hello Craig, yes Craig, it is the eye of the poet not put to waste. There is always something different to see in the clouds. enjoy your day my friend.
Skelly Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 12:11 AM
Nice original take on clouds, very nice Darlene...Delice
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 26, 2021 at 12:04 PM
Hello Delice, I am a cloud watcher. i always see something different in clouds. Hugs Darlene.
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 1:09 PM
You have a great outlook on nature and life in general Darlene, you see things the rest of us tend to miss or overlook, your poem gives a respite from the darkness, cheers David
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Hello David, Thank you David. I often look up to the sky. it amazes me when i see different things in the clouds. Cheers! Darlene
Leffanta Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 11:39 AM
The government would still be waiting for that third X to betray the moonshiners . . . .
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 11:45 AM
Hello Rico, yes they would be. Enjoy your day my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 1:45 AM
Isn't nature amazing Darlene, seeing that would certainly brighten your day.. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Hello Tom, yes nature is beautiful. Yes it did brightened my day. Ejoy your day my friend.
Fenn Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 8:49 PM
Never would have thought of such a display that way. I like how you interpret that! Yes, Kim and Lasaad are right. Maybe you will see some O's in the sky as well and get some hugs!
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Hello Jennifer Fenn, well maybe next time. Mother nature did not put o's only x's It did brightened my day. Hugs.
Poet Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 7:30 PM
What a sweetheart! I believe you have earned it. Darlene, expect some hugs too.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 5:33 AM
Hello Taybe, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 6:26 PM
Aww such sweetness! I think you deserve a couple hugs as well!
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 5:29 AM
Hello Kim, this is what Mother nature showed me. Hugs
Achara Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 3:57 PM
I like...well written.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 4:29 PM
Hello Chetta Achara, hello Chetta, so nice to meet you. Thank you for a lovely comment. enjoy your evening my friend.
Omar Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 3:38 PM
xoxo
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 4:32 PM
Hello Omar, thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your evening my friend.
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