James Fraser Poet Rhyme

The Clouds of Life

When we're born and we see for the very first time
Our parents amidst glee and the hoping that life's fine

We edge into our days fortunate to meld into years
Our parents amidst glee and their hoping for no tears

As we travel life's road yes unknown forks from day one
Our parents amidst thee but knowing it's not all to be fun

Amidst our years of growing we become wise to our surrounds
Our parents amidst thee when in life it sometimes runs aground

It's when our stormy shores tell us of the people we're losing
Our parents amidst thee to no comprehend to life's choosing

When that day arrives and with whom we've grown we've now lost
Our parents amidst thee to meld when life's becomes, exhaust.

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Alison A Smith nee Howarth August 22, 2026 at 11:40 PM A tender reflection on life’s unfolding journey and the losses that gradually shape us. The recurring presence of parents gives the poem a moving sense of love, guidance, and shared vulnerability. James Fraser August 23, 2026 at 2:51 AM Thank you so much for reading my poem, Alison. I recently visited the grave of my brother for the very first time whom passed away aged 9 in 1969. It was time to go through life's doors to address a fear that I had of going there. Wishing you a lovely Sunday 😊