The Clouds

Buoyant on the North west winds;
Shredded clouds expose a half moon eye.
An eye that stares cautiously at
The hyphens of cars below.

Stratus sunsets trace the highway,
That leads to my refuge, 
and shields me from the voyeur and the oncoming night.

I sit upright against unforgiving vinyl,
on the back of a bus that rebounds daily,
between New York City and my nightly abode.

I watch the cirrus race the Greyhound 
and the Mustangs running in packs of three.
A spyglass has formed within a white nimbus,
an oval window into the crowded heavens.

The clotheslines of the Gods turn to skyrockets,
Shooting masterful projections upward,
Now, composed as arrows that hasten
An antelopes final good night.
Clouds drift away without shadow or fault.

The clouds, the clouds
I alone with my burden,
Where do they go?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 22, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Brenda, your imagery is beautiful in this deeply expansive poem, Love it! Looking forward to reading more. Congratulations on your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage today.
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December 9, 2023 at 2:51 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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December 7, 2023 at 1:14 AM
Beautiful write I enjoyed reading your work .
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April 20, 2021 at 10:06 PM
SUPERB POEM PENNED; ENJOYABLE POETIC EXPRESSION
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July 30, 2012 at 8:03 PM
Brenda, I sit at the lap of your talent,with respect, J.A.B. Masterful command of metaphor - lets go to the clouds!
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December 16, 2011 at 6:43 AM
glad i passed by, love this your first posted on soup. harry
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August 3, 2011 at 8:57 PM
Yeah! Brenda very nice winning write moves forward. Congrad's Light & Love
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August 2, 2011 at 8:38 PM
I congratulate you, Brenda on your poem winning the first round. I like your poem and its theme. I wish you success in the finals. -Mohammad
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August 2, 2011 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Brenda. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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April 24, 2011 at 1:18 PM
Brenda ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d
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April 24, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Masny congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette
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April 19, 2011 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Brenda. Love, Carol
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April 19, 2011 at 3:44 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Brenda. I can see those rockets flying and the antelope fleeing across lovely orange western plains. Nice write. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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April 18, 2011 at 12:49 PM
Congrats on being featured this week on Soup, Brenda. Annalise
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April 18, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Congratulations onyourpoem being featured this week, Brenda
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April 13, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative poetry .. very interesting write on clouds... hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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April 13, 2011 at 4:25 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Brenda. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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