The Cloud King

As doves fly overhead
I wonder where they go
do they fly to a home
do they fly to nowhere
Would they return if I asked
could they carry me in wings?
to merge into the clouds
and soar asunder
as the cloud king.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 29, 2009 at 3:02 PM
Interesting perspective with thoughts for the reader to ponder about. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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November 28, 2009 at 2:05 PM
Rich with imagination and wonder. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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November 28, 2009 at 1:30 PM
beautiful poem!! Welcome to poetry soup and thanks for your comments on my works, I have been busy with the holidays and all, sorry to be so late to get back wth you!
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