The Cloud Above the Treetop

Over The treetop Into the sky Noticed a passing cloud Pinkish Turning Its color To that of grey Beauty like no other Darker Night sky It turns to Black like the night No light to refract off The cloud
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Like the use of the word refract..I haven't read that one in awhile..I like the feel of it when saying it..The clouds have been so interesting to me of late..I am seeing some unusual formations...I especially like the whispy ones the remind me of what I think angel wings would look like stretched over the sky.I am glad that you and your family read into the depts of my work most don't..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 12:09 AM
I really like this set of cinqku and I don't think it is even for a contest. Love it!
Edwards Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 9:39 PM
A sweet colorful poem Russell xxx
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