The Closeness

From the milky crimson rosy sky
The buds come to make a dream
To my eyes of hearty love to dye
The beloved soul to be closed rim

The rippling heart dances on a bud
Womb to seize the soul of true love
By the scythe moonlit with a squad
In the closest veins to free fine dove 

Snowflakes on the white city bridge
With the star-studded southern air
Touches the heart of cathedral miss
To make the pavements of closed fair

Blue icicles on the wildflower to grip
The midnight of the elopement chills
To imbue the wrist with palm in trip
For closing the celestial being in a reel
 
Shining sun on a mauve cloud shelters
The footprints on the derelict pebbles 
To make a canvas of momentum her
Closer to staying fine longest honorable

Nature grows to decorate everything fairly
Our love grows to enjoy the closeness fully  


February 19, 2023

Closer to fine Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 3/23/2023 9:36:00 AM
You are a great poet. Your words and verses are very powerful. Congratulations!
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 3/25/2023 1:43:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear poet for your great appreciation and the kind words
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