The Cloister

“Gossip is the fastest form of communication” 

seven small homes on a cul de sac
seven homes from the rest, set back
time passed and brought a mystery 
seven sets of twins, neighbors see

one boy, girl pair all the same age
the blond, blue eyes fueled a rage
questions asked of mothers alone
the father never seemed at home

ignorance fueled gossip, bred hate
they wanted answers which relate
who was the father who so spread
from mom to mom and bed to bed

answers came, they slowly evolved
legal contracts can’t be dissolved
their father’s name thus protected
never faced charges formally read

the secret team had gathered facts
they were convinced of evil acts
gossip spread certainly fueled it
but "in vitro" was named the culprit. 

Aug 27 2011 Charles Henderson
for Rambling’s “Mother” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Poetess Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 10:21 PM
Charles, congratulations on your win in 'mother' contest. Love, Glenna
Guzzi Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 7:20 PM
Oh very good ending..I think the end rhyme of the following line are weak [spread/bed] & [protected/read] also since you don't stay with the same number of syllables per line [which is fine] you could tweek it for better meter..seven grand homes the cul-de sacs best/ seven homes set back far from the rest...bred hatred/they wanted to know who was related..okies hope that was of some help..great take on the topic [juicy] light & love
Williams Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 1:11 PM
hye Charles congrats on your win David
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 7:20 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Mother" contest Charles. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 11:10 PM
Congrats Charles on your wonderful win with this outstanding poetry on Mother.. great write..luv...
Taylor Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 10:58 PM
Congrats on your win, Chas. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
Smith Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 12:38 AM
People are so nosy. Cute poem.
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