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The Clearing

The way of man and the way of God: the two are not the same. For a man will see a forest, and will create a clearing, and hack out an existence, denuding the land of life, using the logs for his home, tilling the ground to plant food, and sit in front of his fire, and eat his food, and declare, “Life is good.” But God will see a clearing, and will invite the birds of the air to cast their seeds where they may, and invite the crawly things to burrow and thrive, and bring forth the rains for drink, and the sunshine for warmth, and declare, “It was very good already.” ---------- for the The Clearing Poetry Contest sponsored by Craig Cornish written on 02/10/23

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Date: 2/20/2023 2:08:00 PM
This is one of the good ones Jeff. I appreciate your poem of opposites and perceptions. Nicely done!
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Date: 2/10/2023 6:31:00 AM
What a neat contrast! You gave much thought to this one!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/10/2023 7:30:00 AM
THanks, Kim - the grandkids and I have been clearing a trail together, and I was thinking - it is *hard* to undo his handiwork!
Date: 2/10/2023 4:46:00 AM
Beautifully contrasted
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/10/2023 7:30:00 AM
Thanks so much for the read and the encouragement!
Date: 2/10/2023 3:37:00 AM
I read this as I have also entered this contest and wondered if we had different takes on the same expression. We do indeed! Well expressed perspective within this poem, I liked it :)
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