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The Clear View

Now, while the fragrance of youth
still moistens the passion of life,
and ripples from a midnight kiss
still surround us, 
let us gather into the scarf of love
every perfect fruit from this fertile meadow~
against the time when reminiscences
become but a swirl in the curve of the river.

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Emile Pinet

Date: 8/31/2021 4:34:00 PM

Your words fill the heart and roll gently off the tongue drifting quietly into memory. This poem lifts its message over the words like a warm wind might rattle the leaves on a summer's eve, leaving understanding and sadness in its wake. Very well written my friend, Emile.

Chetta Achara
Date: 8/31/2021 6:30:00 PM

Thank you. I appreciate your more than kind words.