The City of Brotherly Hatred

Leave while you still can,
Understand this city sucks you in,
It gnaws at your entrails until you flee,
Many are born and bred,
In the city of the dead,
Murder and robbery,
Consume these streets,
Unable to beat,
The odds,
It is so odd,
To find a mark of perfection here,
It does not exist,
It will never exist,
Until the disease,
Of anger, hatred, prejudice, and crime,
Evaporates from these homes,
These streets,
Bleed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 4, 2010 at 5:46 PM
Chilling and sad. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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June 4, 2010 at 2:03 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Melissa. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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April 14, 2010 at 11:10 PM
This is an amazing write- and so true.
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April 13, 2010 at 6:53 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured. My memories of Philly are special, both as a young sailor in the 60's and of my time there at the Base and at the Vet, but Connie Mack still touches my dreams. God Bless. Vince
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April 12, 2010 at 11:57 AM
May congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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April 12, 2010 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations on eing featured this week. Wish you more success in the future. Ernilando
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April 12, 2010 at 10:48 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Melissa. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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April 12, 2010 at 7:19 AM
Congrats on this selection. My son went to college in the City of Brotherly Hatred. He was glad to get out of there; me too. LOve, daver
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April 12, 2010 at 4:57 AM
Congrats Melissa on your featured poem this week on Soup... an excellent choice to feature and share...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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