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The City

Crying, walking alone And no matter what they say My people just talk I hate the city My people kill each other By the guns in their tongues The fake smile on my lips Walking alone and the people Just ask me some addresses Who cares the tears I must be hurry up Death waits me over the city

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 12/6/2015 7:15:00 PM
Dear Naghmeh, your melody (Naghmeh) is sad, mine is always painful. I said it once, " Which one is better, which one is worst? Drowning in water or dying of thirst." Happy days
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:34:00 PM
hope you are safer there may allah bestow you with best and protect you and us all from bullets and pain may u live happy and find peace all the way simply awsm.. these few words of yours actually narrated a long story of longing for peace..respect and love #keep a smile and nva fear and care for whosoever it is #NICE WRITE
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Naghmeh Heidari
Date: 4/28/2015 10:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Kamran. I hope for you too. I wish for all people who are under pain, injustice and war.
Date: 4/19/2015 8:18:00 AM
A beautiful yet simple poem about your love/hate relationship with your city.
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Naghmeh Heidari
Date: 4/20/2015 11:35:00 AM
Thank you dear Ayesha