The Circles

Looked at the outside of steel window
Around in the dark, awesome feelings into the mid-night air
What the news was brought in the feelings!

Eyes of the orphan cat was flaming on the corridor.

Waiting for the light in the window 
Dark vision comes down into my eyes by cycle-weariness
Down from one circle to another circle in time-blindness

Who stands here, the Islamic old man!
Frustrated vision!
History of terrorism was carved on his burnt body
He wants to say something!

A white-complexioned Christian young man stands into the neighbor circle,
Surprised eyes! 
White-skinned history was printed on his blood-stained body 
He wants to know something!

A dark-colored Hindu boy stands into the third circle, 
Illusive vision!
History of third world is awakened on his envenomed body
He wants a little smile!

The old man, young man and boy are coming forward from the circles
Great distance... Near ...in front the room... 
Who are you? No reply
They disappear into the tuberose equipped black and white photo of my father
Dad is smiling, I am senseless! 

Tears are dropping from the eyes of our cat on the corridor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 22, 2015 at 7:58 PM
Sandip :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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March 9, 2015 at 4:22 PM
Sandip, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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December 26, 2014 at 10:18 PM
SANDIP, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
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December 24, 2014 at 5:00 PM
Great winning work..Way to go with this one..Congrats..Sara
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December 18, 2014 at 5:47 AM
Touchy and moving write, nicely done, congratulations on the win, Sandeep
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December 17, 2014 at 2:58 PM
such a powerful heartfelt poem Sandip many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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December 5, 2014 at 12:56 AM
Moving, warm and honest; I give it a 7.
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November 25, 2014 at 3:53 AM
All-time Best FATHER Poem, HISTORY Poem and SATIRE Poem by Poetry Soup Administrators...I am grateful...Thanks to them. And best wishes to my dear lovely friends...
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November 24, 2014 at 2:33 PM
- Dear Sandip, this is deep from your heart - and a fantastic write, with much emotion - Your soul feels in the lines ... (7!!!) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 23, 2014 at 7:48 AM
Hi Sandip! I really enjoyed reading your very nice poetic piece. So filled of an array of emotions, textures and imagery. A 7 for me! :) Love and light! xxx D.
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November 22, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Sandip, I love this poem. The message and emotion come through perfectly! You have a gift in any language...love and blessings to you, Rhonda
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November 22, 2014 at 8:22 PM
wow, putting this with the cat's eyes and your own tearing eyes. that was genius!! What a GREAT poem on humanity, sandip
Mcdaid Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 3:03 PM
beautifully drawn piece sandip truly love this piece from you dear friend
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November 22, 2014 at 2:42 PM
A favourite for this poem Goswami.You are becoming one of my favourite poets.Your work reminds me of anorher great poet. UU o UU
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November 22, 2014 at 1:02 PM
I would like to make the comment, that: this beautiful poem has lost nothing in the translation...Simply beautiful!!
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November 22, 2014 at 1:08 PM
Thank you my dear friend. I did not understand to my translation. Really you are my true friend and guide...I was in depression, now I feel happiness. I dedicate the poem to you my dear new friend....
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November 22, 2014 at 12:42 PM
I tried to translate my Bengali poem BRITTA which is one of my favorite poems...Sorry for poor translation...
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