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The Circles

Looked at the outside of steel window Around in the dark, awesome feelings into the mid-night air What the news was brought in the feelings! Eyes of the orphan cat was flaming on the corridor. Waiting for the light in the window Dark vision comes down into my eyes by cycle-weariness Down from one circle to another circle in time-blindness Who stands here, the Islamic old man! Frustrated vision! History of terrorism was carved on his burnt body He wants to say something! A white-complexioned Christian young man stands into the neighbor circle, Surprised eyes! White-skinned history was printed on his blood-stained body He wants to know something! A dark-colored Hindu boy stands into the third circle, Illusive vision! History of third world is awakened on his envenomed body He wants a little smile! The old man, young man and boy are coming forward from the circles Great distance... Near ...in front the room... Who are you? No reply They disappear into the tuberose equipped black and white photo of my father Dad is smiling, I am senseless! Tears are dropping from the eyes of our cat on the corridor. SANDIP GOSWAMI, INDIA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/22/2015 7:58:00 PM
Sandip :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 3/9/2015 4:22:00 PM
Sandip, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Date: 12/26/2014 10:18:00 PM
SANDIP, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
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Date: 12/24/2014 5:00:00 PM
Great winning work..Way to go with this one..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/18/2014 5:47:00 AM
Touchy and moving write, nicely done, congratulations on the win, Sandeep
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Date: 12/17/2014 2:58:00 PM
such a powerful heartfelt poem Sandip many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/5/2014 12:56:00 AM
Moving, warm and honest; I give it a 7.
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:53:00 AM
All-time Best FATHER Poem, HISTORY Poem and SATIRE Poem by Poetry Soup Administrators...I am grateful...Thanks to them. And best wishes to my dear lovely friends...
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Date: 11/24/2014 2:33:00 PM
- Dear Sandip, this is deep from your heart - and a fantastic write, with much emotion - Your soul feels in the lines ... (7!!!) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/23/2014 7:48:00 AM
Hi Sandip! I really enjoyed reading your very nice poetic piece. So filled of an array of emotions, textures and imagery. A 7 for me! :) Love and light! xxx D.
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Date: 11/22/2014 8:40:00 PM
Sandip, I love this poem. The message and emotion come through perfectly! You have a gift in any language...love and blessings to you, Rhonda
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Date: 11/22/2014 8:22:00 PM
wow, putting this with the cat's eyes and your own tearing eyes. that was genius!! What a GREAT poem on humanity, sandip
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Date: 11/22/2014 3:03:00 PM
beautifully drawn piece sandip truly love this piece from you dear friend
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Date: 11/22/2014 2:42:00 PM
A favourite for this poem Goswami.You are becoming one of my favourite poets.Your work reminds me of anorher great poet. UU o UU
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Date: 11/22/2014 1:02:00 PM
I would like to make the comment, that: this beautiful poem has lost nothing in the translation...Simply beautiful!!
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Date: 11/22/2014 1:08:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. I did not understand to my translation. Really you are my true friend and guide...I was in depression, now I feel happiness. I dedicate the poem to you my dear new friend....
Date: 11/22/2014 12:42:00 PM
I tried to translate my Bengali poem BRITTA which is one of my favorite poems...Sorry for poor translation...
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