Sandra Haight Poet Tanka

The Circle

The Circle

Beginning and end
Together form full circle...
Life connects with death.

Your circle is formed…with tears
I mourn death’s painful closure.


© Sandra M. Haight 2015 
   All Rights Reserved

~NA~
Contest: Tanka Tears
Sponsor: Rick Parise
Judged: 03/10/2015

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Sara Kendrick February 10, 2015 at 5:32 AM Life does come full circle and we don't know when..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..This will be an interesting addition to Rick's contest..Sara Sandra Haight February 12, 2015 at 4:16 PM Hi Sara, thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment. Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong February 10, 2015 at 12:48 AM The stages of death really take a toll on a person, your poem expresses this well Sandra. Your Tanka is beautifully written! Sandra Haight February 12, 2015 at 4:16 PM Hi Connie, I appreciate your stopping by with your positive comments! Thanks so much. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2015 at 6:36 PM A well crafted tanka from you, dear. I see this contest filling up super fast and I have no clue what to do for it!!

Dorian Petersen Potter February 9, 2015 at 5:42 PM Excellent pen Sandra!A 7 from me! the way I see it we never really die but hopefully we go to a better one, dear friend. Have a nice day! In His light! God bless! :) Love n hugs! xxx D. Sandra Haight February 12, 2015 at 4:23 PM Yes, Dorian, it is a circle that leads to the next cycle in the journey of the soul. Thank you so much for your supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra