The Christmas Star

pine busting with bulbs
scintillated in tinsel —
no room for the Star.

12/8/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kiser Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 8:19 AM
And how many times have we all done that? Superb imagery in a small poem. Beautiful.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 10:18 AM
Thank you, M.L.!
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 6:28 PM
My favorite of the three. LOVE this one, especially the last line.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 6:30 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Cunningham Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 2:04 PM
Sad in a way Kim as many forget what Christmas is all about. Lovely hakiu. Tom.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 3:59 PM
Thank you so much, Tom!
La France Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Kim, love your haiku, oh just stick that star on the top somehow, but yes sometimes there can be just too many decorations !!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2018 at 12:18 PM
For sure...also alludes to there being no room in the inn :) Blessings, Dear Heart!
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