The Christmas Star

pine busting with bulbs scintillated in tinsel — no room for the Star. 12/8/2018

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Date: 12/12/2018 8:19:00 AM

And how many times have we all done that? Superb imagery in a small poem. Beautiful.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/12/2018 10:18:00 AM

Thank you, M.L.!

Date: 12/10/2018 6:28:00 PM

My favorite of the three. LOVE this one, especially the last line.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/10/2018 6:30:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Date: 12/9/2018 2:04:00 PM

Sad in a way Kim as many forget what Christmas is all about. Lovely hakiu. Tom.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2018 3:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Tom!

Date: 12/9/2018 11:58:00 AM

Kim, love your haiku, oh just stick that star on the top somehow, but yes sometimes there can be just too many decorations !!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2018 12:18:00 PM

For sure...also alludes to there being no room in the inn :) Blessings, Dear Heart!