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The Christmas Bench

It had snowed all of Christmas day- Most of my beloved are gone now, so in the park I stroll and stray; where snow has fallen on each bough. The park is empty except for me, and under trees in prayer, I rest. This bench could easily fit three. Yes, I feel sadness in my chest. Yet, the beauty of falling snow, and the winter scene that I behold; gives me a smile and a warm glow, that I sit not feeling the cold. God created for me, this scene. He filled my heart with inner calm, and cold air crisp, fresh and clean. I thank him with hands palm to palm- ____________________________ November 14, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/The Christmas Bench Copyright Protected, ID 18-1081-215-01 All Rights Reserved, Written in Pseudonym. Written for the contest, The Park Bench sponsor, Sara Kenrick (Inspiration: Pic #4) First Place
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La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 2:10 PM
Thank you Joseph, Sara, and Jan for visiting my poem with those great comments and congratulations, appreciate ~
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 3:07 PM
such sadness my friend , I know how much you miss your family. Christmas is not a happy time for many:-( many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Hugs !
Kendrick Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 6:31 AM
Very expressive and emotive winning work. I enjoyed reading this one. I hope only imagination and not a lonely life. May this be the best Christmas season for you and your family. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Dear Heart, When I read the last stanza I know that you have a good life relating to nature which is a good thing. Sara
La France Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Sara, thank you for the contest and my placement, sadly it is my reality ~
May Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:56 AM
Beautiful write DH..Congrats on your win..
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 2:08 PM
~.~
La France Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 9:27 AM
Thank you WW for visiting my poem and commenting, appreciate a lot ~
Warrior Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 6:20 AM
Ah! I could smell the freshness in your verse Constance...lovely write my friend...love & light...^WW^
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