Eileen Manassian Poet Haiku

The Chorus of Dawn- Haiku Medley

World hushed in silence
          Birds unable to keep still…
             The chorus of dawn

                Melody of praise
     Chases the shroud of the night…
             Blessed hues of morn

           Dawn gives way to day
            The celebration of life…
               Is well under way	

           Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Raul Moreno March 14, 2013 at 4:32 PM This is very beautiful... The first and second were stunning...-R

Connie Gildersleeve March 1, 2013 at 12:12 PM Eileen a beautiful painted melody with your Haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie

Kash Poet March 1, 2013 at 8:56 AM very nice imagery!Love this.Read my poem YOUR SINGLE GLANCE when u get time. Eileen Manassian March 1, 2013 at 9:56 AM Thanks! Will check it out right now! :)

Richard Lamoureux March 1, 2013 at 6:16 AM This is the form that I struggle with but you seem to have the hang of it. Eileen Manassian March 1, 2013 at 8:05 AM Richard, I don't know if I have it down pat. I had some discussions with two Poetry Soupers about this form. Seems that there is more to it than this...I try to get the breakoff after the second line where the BAM is supposed to come it. I hope I've managed. I do stick to th 5-7-5 syllable rule so...yea...glad you liked it!

Guru Jad March 1, 2013 at 6:13 AM I never understood Haikus... They are so Japanese!!! Ha-ha.. But you have made this venture into my heart and my brain!!! You are so talented, my dear!! Queen Eileen.... this is a masterpiece! Eileen Manassian March 1, 2013 at 8:07 AM Guru dear...thank you so much for your sweet post. I do love hearing from you and SEEING you! HA HA! Thanks for the visit in my office the other day! Well, I really wasn't much into haikus...and not because they are Japanese...HAHA! No...but I like them because you can say so much in so little and feel satisfied! Hugs!

Harry Horsman March 1, 2013 at 6:08 AM Oh i am so glad, to be the first here to witness this wonderful poetry, the early bird gets the worms, so they say..love this beauty Eileen Manassian March 1, 2013 at 8:09 AM Glad your tum tum is full of yummy cheese, though I don't try to write cheesy stuff! HA HA! ;) Eileen Manassian March 1, 2013 at 8:08 AM Harry...my pleasure to have you as the first to read this! :) How have you been, my dear! I always love hearing from you! Glad you liked it! Take care! Guru Jad March 1, 2013 at 6:14 AM ....... but the second mouse eats the cheese :D... so the proverb continues hahaha...