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The Choosen One

already naked
estimating time
of arrival suggest
coordinates for my
backyard positioning of
my uncoordinated body
leaving a bit of flexibility
in case of a need for any
slight rearrangements i
might need to make in
deed because this is
poetics not rocket
science and in 
fact it's a 
landing 
not a

launch


i see her
here she
comes

right 

there yet
they say
they all

look 
the same

but to know
her is to love
her so i know
even though

it's the first
snow of
the year
it's clear

in this
stormy
sky that

that is her
that i see
falling

and that

though she has never
seen one she has all
this time been one
as we all are if we
agree to see our
selves as such

but she may not know
since never seeing
snow that each
flake is never
the same so
each is an 

individual

so now standing
all this time still out
standing running down
my check list

naked
backyard
craning neck
outstretched arms

frozen so
statuesque

swooning like 
a swan 

an ice sculpture
needing just
one small
fixture

my bay 
door 
mouth 
opens 
and out 
comes

my tongue as far as i can extend

it

sticking out as
a landing strip

for her 
star ship

body bound
delicate now

a snowflake
which after

all this 
time

she

melts
in my

mouth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/25/2019 11:15:00 PM
Jeff, Complex and full of a mystique the likes of....oh heck, I like your poem. PS I think your return key on your keyboard may be sticking. Merry Christmas to you and yours. -Richard
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/26/2019 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Richard for the read and the like. I don't understand about my "return key". Could you please qualify??? especially if something is wro. Thank you.
Date: 12/25/2019 9:54:00 PM
Wonderful read Jeff! I thoroughly enjoyed that. Merry Christmas my friend, xomo
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/26/2019 6:21:00 AM
Thanks always very much Maureen. Three poems converged into one. I threw it out there, but on hind sight it's not as tight as I'd like it to be. But thank you all the same.

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