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The Chipmunk

The Chipmunk Chirps loudly Scurries about Across the stone wall Chasing others Playful ways Hide and Seek Heidi Sands 8/6/17

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Ronald A. Williams

Date: 8/19/2017 10:33:00 PM

Very skilled to get the form right with good wording. Cool

Dean Wood

Date: 8/6/2017 9:58:00 PM

Oh, this is a fun one Heidi. I have never seen this form before. Nice job! - Dean

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/7/2017 6:11:00 AM

Thank you, Dean! I just saw it recently. I have only done a couple. It is fun. :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/6/2017 6:59:00 PM

This is perfect! i love the playfulness of this write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious poem this awesome day! You have delivered a fabulous and delightful piece here Heidi! Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/6/2017 7:06:00 PM

Thank you. I was hoping it would be a fun read :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/6/2017 5:21:00 PM

A delightful write Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/6/2017 5:23:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2017 3:19:00 PM

- I have never seen a chipmunk, Heidi - I think it's a skilled digger ... am I right ? - A nice poem - Your poems come like pearls on a string ... impressive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/6/2017 3:56:00 PM

Really Sunshine? You have never seen one? Oh, I should try to get a photo of one for the site. I do have a photo of a red squirrel. But, lately the photos of mine that I upload, don't seem to stay showing for some reason. But, yes they dig holes in the ground. Thank you for your kind feedback on my poetry :)