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The chipmunk

the chipmunk stopped
an acorn in each cheek
~ room for a third



AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hargreaves Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 11:43 AM
I've watched these sqirrels. Cheeks full. In times of plenty they prepare for times of lean.
Gauthier Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 4:13 PM
smart little creatures ~
Pettit Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 5:18 PM
I had to check this one out because I have seen so many poems about squirrels lately. Nice little humorous write.
Gauthier Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:20 AM
LOL thanks, Robert ~
Sands Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 8:22 AM
Oh, I love this and I can picture it clearly Line! Well done :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 9:04 PM
Thanks, Heidi ~
Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 7:48 AM
Cute. ;0)
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 7:50 AM
Thanks, Richard ~
Wolf Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:40 PM
Ha, ha, ha! Three-leaf clover; three-cheek squirrel. Four-leaf clover; ... ?!! :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 9:06 PM
lol I know what you mean ~
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 4:30 PM
utterly charming and adorable, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 9:06 PM
Thanks, Andrea ~
Rodrigues Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 9:14 AM
A mouthful! Cute!
Gauthier Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 9:05 PM
Thanks, Kim ~
Y. Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 5:50 AM
Hi Line, Good haiku with great imagery. I could just picture the whole scene. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Gauthier Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 9:06 PM
Thanks for the inspiration, Alexis ~
Mcintosh Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 5:06 AM
Love this. I love haiku ... God bless you and have a great day. Love, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 5:07 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Gina.
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