The Chin Crazy In Love

With you I could do it my way is a pleasure If you go away my bouquet will be empty I know you'll fill the vase forever and ever Hey stay in the gray and green my moonlight lady If you go away my bouquet will be empty I can’t help falling in love with you at the hill Hey stay in the gray and green my moonlight lady The moon with the two lovers at the window sill I can’t help falling in love with you at the hill I cling to these feelings like the cup with the tea The moon with the two lovers at the window sill In your poems the love has been a friend to me I cling to these feelings like the cup with the tea We killed the ducks but love is on our side again In your poems the love has been a friend to me The chin crazy in love as we walk in the rain We killed the ducks but love is on our side again The red lilacs bloom in your breath when I need you The chin crazy in love as we walk in the rain The air that I breathe from your lungs smells of the dew The red lilacs bloom in your breath when I need you I know you'll fill the vase forever and ever The air that I breathe from your lungs smells of the dew With you I could do it my way is a pleasure April 9, 2018 Music pantoum - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One Musician: Julio Iglesias Titles: 1) My Way 2) If you go away 3) Forever and ever 4) Moonlight lady 5) Can’t help falling in love 6) Feelings 7) Two Lovers 8) Love has been a friend to me 9) Love is on our side again 10) Crazy in love 11) when I need you 12) The air that I breathe 13) Hey
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Shagun Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 9:21 AM
This is wonderful. :)
Gupta Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 9:24 AM
Thank you
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Congratulations on your First Place win, Probir! Well done weaving the song titles into this difficult Pantoum form! Sandra
Gupta Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 9:29 AM
I feel embarrassed, Sandra, as I see now that I didn't thank you for your compliments ... I am sorry ... Thank you so much for liking the placement ...
Roper Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Awesome creative verse, Probir, congratulations on your Pantoum win... Hugs Eve
Sands Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations for your win Probir :)
Gupta Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi ... Sorry that I failed to acknowledge in time ...
Pett Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 5:08 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Probir, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your beautifully written pantoum. :))
Gupta Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Thank you, Roy ... Glad you like ...
Ashley Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 9:16 PM
Every line is just so poetic, Probir. Your song titles melt easily into the graceful beauty of your pantoum. Congratulations on your fantastic win! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Gupta Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Aaah, Susan, I will never be able to say the way you lay your sunshine words ... thank you so much ... for different reasons I have to be irregular at poetry soup ... I will have to try to recoup ...
Gentile Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Congratulations on your top placement, Probir, well done !!
Gupta Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 9:31 PM
Thank you so much, Mike ...
Gentry Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 2:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win! Well done.
Gupta Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 9:31 PM
Glad you like ... thank you so much ...
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 1:38 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful 1st place in the competition, a great music choice Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Thank you so much, Sunshine ...
Y. Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Hi Phrobir, You have penned such a well written Pantoum. And you used the song titles very well. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest:-) Alexis
Gupta Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 9:35 PM
Delighted that you like, Alexis ... thank you so much ...
One Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 11:55 AM
My favourite pantoum this one Probir, loved some of the lines in this one, especially the red lilac bloom in your breath when I need you.. Great choice of artist also.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Gupta Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 12:08 PM
Thank you so much, Silent for the rating ... I lack adequate words to express my feelings ... thank you ...
Robinson Jr. Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Wonderful romantic prose, Probir. Your ink flows a Ganges river of love. Simple beautiful this poem be. Love and joy always.
Gupta Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 9:01 PM
Thank you so much, Freddie ...
Andresen Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 1:14 PM
- An amazing artist Julio Iglesias, Probir - A beautiful writing :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 8:06 PM
Thanks, Sunshine ... the morning is all sunshine here now ...
Smith Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 11:43 AM
Tough form for me Probir, best wishes in the contest...
Gupta Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 12:13 PM
But the form is not tough at all ... especially for a powerful poet like you ... actually what has made the writing time taking is the use of titles ... Unrhymed short quatrains are more pleasant read in my view ... Thank you for visiting ...
Rodrigues Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 11:25 AM
My fave line: Hey stay in the gray and green my moonlight lady The moon with the two lovers at the window sill
Gupta Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 12:15 PM
I am honoured, Kim ...
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