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The Children of Ever Lasting

( dreamed ) Down toward the moon beams and cross the arrowed crows, Crying in their sun light as the morning magnet glows. Flying proper diamonds as everyone now sees The Yawning bed time storey is falling off the trees. glowing people a crying dog And as no one beats the drum, The Countless faces sing to me as madness has its fun. The up shot is the down and the middle has no end As the laughing shadowed figure beckons his oldest friend. Get to where the bedlam is and wipe away that tear For Impossible things swoop on wings feeding off your fear. Gypsy wagon passing by as her sleeping chickens wave ?? This seems to mean, to have them dream , if freedom’s what they crave. A crack appears above the time But the colours keep on dancing Eyes of green and most serene these children of everlasting.

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Date: 3/27/2020 12:15:00 PM
Congrats on your top win!;)
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Simon King
Date: 3/27/2020 2:16:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 3/13/2020 7:34:00 AM
I agree with Lin, this one is a personal favourite of the ones I have read so far. Well done.
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Date: 3/10/2020 7:13:00 AM
Simon, I've read all of your poetry and your variance of styles is quite good. Your fox loses his squabble with a gun totin' chicken indicates your sense of humor. Your rhymes, as in this one about children are those I like best, perhaps it's because I'm a rhymer at heart. I wish you well on this site. I recently stopped posting on PS, but remain friends with many good poets here. I hope they read you...your poetry is worthy to be read.
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Simon King
Date: 3/10/2020 8:50:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words lin they are greatly appreciated , Kindest regards Simon .

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