The Children and I Face Summer

climbing
running

laughing
sunning 

hoses 
spraying

outside, 
staying

till past 
sunset

Happy?
You bet!

~~~~~~~

summer 
swelter

seeking 
shelter

fanning 
sweating

sighing
fretting

turn up
AC

now I’m 
happy


June 14, 2022
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Kauffman Avatar
June 17, 2022 at 10:25 AM
Love celebrating summer - even the sweating and sweltering - with you Janice. So descriptive. I can feel the heat of a summer's day. Congratulations. Blessings!
Canerdy Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 7:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sam! Highs are mid- to high-nineties with heat indices of 105 in Mississippi! Janice
Horsman Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 9:38 PM
I'm following your footsteps, Janice, I'm happy reading this joyous poetry Too.
Canerdy Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 10:29 AM
Thanks so much, Harry. Janice
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 3:43 PM
Excellent Footles Janice. For the first seven years here in Hawaii I lived without A/C. I barely wore clothes. I grew up in sweltering heat without A/C. I spent a lot of time at the A/C library. It is good I love to read. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
Canerdy Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 3:47 PM
Thanks so much, Connie. We didn't have ac--or indoor plumbing or running water--till I was almost grown! Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 1:05 PM
A creative/fun Footle write. The Summer will be over before you know it. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Canerdy Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 3:45 PM
Thanks so much, Paula. Janice
Leffanta Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 12:08 PM
Well thought and done! Enjoyed! Aloha!
Canerdy Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 1:20 PM
Thanks so much, Rico. Janice
Cunningham Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 9:57 AM
Great string of footles Janice, so addictive once you start. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 1:19 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice
Jones Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 6:56 AM
Delightful poem with excellent target words capturing the essence of summer!
Canerdy Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Thanks so much, Karen. Janice
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