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The Charm of Winter Interlude

sprinkles of studded snowflakes white bathe faces in lamplights’ braided glow anklets of stars shape alleys with solstice delight breeze plays the flute, gloves touching fires slow evening strolls among vanishing wet-sprayed dew of what magic this sagittarian frost paints laces ripening cups of dripping weeds, eyes radiating blue bodies stitched in quilts warmed by coiled embraces while stirrings of pearl doves’ tunes softly ensue and so, winter descends with a chill and prayer. glory, glory be. ( for Carol Brown's Welcoming Winter Contest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/24/2014 7:59:00 PM
You have welcomed winter very prettily. Most of us are so happy to see it go. Nice poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/6/2011 11:57:00 AM
Wonderful portray of descending Winter!--kashinath
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Date: 11/10/2010 9:11:00 PM
Nette, thanks for taking the time to read me and to make a comment, all the best in the contest. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/9/2010 6:21:00 AM
enjoted your message wit thanks, robb... keep the power of your pen fllowing! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/9/2010 6:20:00 AM
a sweet reat from you, andrea... thank you!
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Date: 11/8/2010 8:18:00 PM
What a very interesting and charming way to do the contest, Nette. Quite original! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/8/2010 1:14:00 PM
a pleasure to receive such lovely comment from you, carol. thanks loads! warnest,nette
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Date: 11/8/2010 12:50:00 PM
thanks for your lovely response and wishes, joyce! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/8/2010 12:44:00 PM
This is a lovely entry Nette. Thank you for commenting on my latest posting and I look forward to seeing mor of your work. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/8/2010 12:35:00 PM
so nice to see you here, farncine... thank you for your feedback! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/8/2010 12:24:00 PM
thats lovely nette, good luck in the contest
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Date: 11/8/2010 12:02:00 PM
pleased you liked this one, emmanuel.. thanks loads! nette
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Date: 11/8/2010 11:39:00 AM
Good work! Weldone with the choice of words simple.
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