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The Changing of the Gods

There’s a moment sad in a way but happiness is the order of the day There’s a moment when mom and dad are no longer gods, though we’re not yet comrades… There’s a moment when yes, we’re glad in a sense, but with all our foibles and flaws exposed ~ you and I, mom, our little lambs have deposed

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Date: 5/13/2022 2:55:00 PM
One minute they want a tricycle, the next month they have their hand out for your car key.
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Date: 5/10/2022 5:26:00 PM
I really enjoyed your rhyme, my friend.. An amazing write, Gershon! Many blessings..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/10/2022 6:03:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment, Robertina! Happiness and Joy, Gershon
Date: 5/10/2022 12:40:00 PM
The walk into early adulthood is not easy!
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Date: 5/10/2022 6:02:00 PM
You are right. I think the psychologists call ages 22-28 'Emerging Adulthood' now. What a country!
Date: 5/10/2022 5:36:00 AM
YEAH....but they keep dropping off those little replicas for a visit......
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Date: 5/10/2022 5:54:00 PM
I think they call those 'little replicas' matrushkas and patrushkas! ~ Dedushka and Babushka
Date: 5/9/2022 9:10:00 PM
I love the commercial on T.V. that has an old lady telling her neighbor next door as she watches her grown son returning home again, "YOU WANT THE KIDS TO LEAVE HOME? STOP COOKING WITH CHEESE!" Since my girls all left and made homes of their own I have missed them terribly. A fine write my friend God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/10/2022 5:52:00 PM
Say Cheese, please -- except when cooking. Smiles, gw
Date: 5/9/2022 7:52:00 PM
Yes, comes a time when the fledglings leave the nest. But, believe it or not, in the bird kingdom most fledglings get kicked out because they are too big for the nest!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/10/2022 5:47:00 PM
Unlike our kids, those fledglings... as our kids are WAY too big for the nest. Oh, well...

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