The Cellphone Epidemic

Invited friends over to stare at our phones together Do you wanna come by but don't forget your phone either Must keep up on the news of the nation Though we only hear half the conversation It's enough to catch the drift and don't miss it altogether

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/21/2019 11:23:00 AM
I like the meaning of the poem but was disappointed that the rhythm of the first two lines wasn't carried through. The 14 syllables each of the first two lines had a strange carnival vibe to it.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/21/2019 4:38:00 PM
Thank you for your constructive comments, my friend!!! Much Appreciated!!! Cheers Jack!!!
Date: 9/21/2019 10:14:00 AM
Sad really, people don't talk anymore , but man evolves and in time babies will be born with a stooped neck and a big right hand and a thin index finger for texting, Bring back carrier pigeons ,coo coo
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Date: 9/21/2019 10:33:00 AM
Well I don't think I'll be around or will I! Might come sooner than we think! Cheers my British pal!!!
Date: 9/21/2019 8:53:00 AM
Ahhh funny. Yeah no. Staying away from those waves. ~x
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/21/2019 9:06:00 AM
You and me both... what's next, my love? Touching feely stuff??? WHOAAAAA! LOL XOX
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