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The Celestial Ring

Looking upward A Celestial Gift Unified For a moment Earth's Gaze to uplift Two heavenly bodies Had gifted a Ring A curious, Golden Magnificent thing! When in our darkness Heaven inspired Uninted gaze Thats LOVE Transpired I think it not Coincidence A gaze to Heaven In reverence So Lovely and Awesome A curious thing The gifting of Love A Heavenly Ring

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Sotto Poet

Date: 10/28/2023 7:06:00 PM

This exquisite piece of poetry captivates the reader, skillfully delving into the enigmatic realms of unseen forces and their profound impact. It is a splendid creation that beautifully embodies the essence of spirituality.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2023 12:27:00 PM

wow, what a lovely sight to see!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/15/2023 7:07:00 PM

The perfect circle, a heavenly thing! Ethereal ink, BJ!

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 10/16/2023 12:10:00 PM

Thank you Gershon, wasn't that an amazing gift? Gosh, it was beautiful! We could only see a partial eclipse where we live, it was still amazing. I had my laptop open watching it online as it dazzled all witnessing it!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/15/2023 6:36:00 AM

So Lovely and Awesome A curious thing The gifting of Love A Heavenly Ring--so beautiful a description, BJ. I didn't see it in the skies but saw the photos circulating in news. It is mystical and magical.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 10/16/2023 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Vijay! :) We couldn't see it completely from where we live, but a partial eclipse was still so amazing. I too watched online; I would have loved to have been able to travel to where we could see it in person. Those photos are incredible, I've seen them as well :)

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2023 2:55:00 AM

Your spirituality glows in this poem my friend... blessed is your pen and your heart that your write with so much positivity and love.. if only all poets were like you... i would give the gift of love to everyone... love this one... missed your poetry... thank you for blessing this site with your words..

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 10/16/2023 12:17:00 PM

Aw, thank you Silent One, I appreciate your kind words :) I think you're a very kind person, and I'm glad you're back on the Soup writing again. I am on here when I can be, and I'm always encouraged by the amazing poets on this site, you know I love your poems, even have one of your books, a true treasure. I hope you have a blessed day my friend :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/15/2023 2:29:00 AM

Another beautiful spiritual poem. Blessings.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 10/16/2023 12:18:00 PM

Thank you, Victor, be blessed as well my friend :)

Karen Jones

Date: 10/14/2023 8:06:00 PM

This is beautiful BJ!

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 10/16/2023 12:18:00 PM

Thank you so much Karen :) You're visits and words are so uplifting to me :) <3