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The Celestial Ring

                                            
                                            Looking upward

                                             A Celestial Gift

                                                   Unified 

                                               For a moment

                                                  Earth's

                                              Gaze to uplift

                                         Two heavenly bodies

                                           Had gifted a Ring

                                           A curious, Golden

                                           Magnificent thing!

                                        When in our darkness

                                           Heaven inspired

                                             Uninted  gaze

                                              Thats LOVE

                                              Transpired 

                                             I think it not

                                              Coincidence

                                           A gaze to Heaven

                                             In reverence 

                                      So Lovely and Awesome

                                           A curious thing 

                                         The gifting of Love

                                           A Heavenly Ring

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Sotto Poet Date: 10/28/2023 7:06:00 PM This exquisite piece of poetry captivates the reader, skillfully delving into the enigmatic realms of unseen forces and their profound impact. It is a splendid creation that beautifully embodies the essence of spirituality. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/19/2023 12:27:00 PM wow, what a lovely sight to see! Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/15/2023 7:07:00 PM The perfect circle, a heavenly thing! Ethereal ink, BJ! Login to Reply Bj Legros Kelley Date: 10/16/2023 12:10:00 PM Thank you Gershon, wasn't that an amazing gift? Gosh, it was beautiful! We could only see a partial eclipse where we live, it was still amazing. I had my laptop open watching it online as it dazzled all witnessing it!

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/15/2023 6:36:00 AM So Lovely and Awesome A curious thing The gifting of Love A Heavenly Ring--so beautiful a description, BJ. I didn't see it in the skies but saw the photos circulating in news. It is mystical and magical. Login to Reply Bj Legros Kelley Date: 10/16/2023 12:13:00 PM Thank you Vijay! :) We couldn't see it completely from where we live, but a partial eclipse was still so amazing. I too watched online; I would have loved to have been able to travel to where we could see it in person. Those photos are incredible, I've seen them as well :)

Silent One Date: 10/15/2023 2:55:00 AM Your spirituality glows in this poem my friend... blessed is your pen and your heart that your write with so much positivity and love.. if only all poets were like you... i would give the gift of love to everyone... love this one... missed your poetry... thank you for blessing this site with your words.. Login to Reply Bj Legros Kelley Date: 10/16/2023 12:17:00 PM Aw, thank you Silent One, I appreciate your kind words :) I think you're a very kind person, and I'm glad you're back on the Soup writing again. I am on here when I can be, and I'm always encouraged by the amazing poets on this site, you know I love your poems, even have one of your books, a true treasure. I hope you have a blessed day my friend :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/15/2023 2:29:00 AM Another beautiful spiritual poem. Blessings. Login to Reply Bj Legros Kelley Date: 10/16/2023 12:18:00 PM Thank you, Victor, be blessed as well my friend :)

Karen Jones Date: 10/14/2023 8:06:00 PM This is beautiful BJ! Login to Reply Bj Legros Kelley Date: 10/16/2023 12:18:00 PM Thank you so much Karen :) You're visits and words are so uplifting to me :) <3