The Ceiling

What are you looking at?
 why are you in that tub with a blindfold?
 Pulled across to one side of your head?...odd
 Do you want to see or no?
 Do I know you?
 There is no water in the tub. and its so cold in here at least 60 degrees...
 This bathroom is unusually large, walls are bone white, but dirty..
 large as a dinning room for 30 guest or more.....and you are in the centre of it
 Why won't you talk or say something?
 Are we in a old dinning room?
 you are just staring at me with one eye covered.... this won't help you know!

Okay obviously you want me to figure out another clue...
 I can do that, but you must answer my questions
 please?

Who are you, why did you bring me here?
 and what are you staring at on the ceiling or are you just day dreaming
 hmmmm............. this is weird.
 Should I whisper make it warmer in here?

I will sit here until you give me something, an answer.....
 why am I in a bathroom with a naked you....
 A naked pale white woman with a hunter green satin blindfold
 Did you know Elizabeth too?
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/27/2013 10:09:00 AM
Hi Fiona, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA
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Date: 10/27/2013 1:34:00 AM
Fiona, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT
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