The Ceiling

Sometimes it feels as if my prayers hit the ceiling
Your word tells me its untrue
But your silence leaves me reeling

I call out to you from the depths of despair
Wondering, hoping, and knowing  that you will be there
You’ve always been faithful,
You’ve always been true
But my life once again
Has fallen askew

O Lord why does this happen
Do I look away
Do I allow my own thoughts
To lead me astray

I’ve followed you now since the time I was eight
So why is this always the same old debate
My microwave prayers just won’t get this done
So a time of renewing must be sought and won

Heal me Lord of my want and desire
Lead me O Lord to the realm that is higher
Let me always be faithful
Let me always be true
Let me always be knowing 
I’m living for you

But I cry out to you God
This time please don’t tarry
The emotions are raw
And sometimes quite scary

Touch those I love
That whole they will feel
Honor them with your presence
And make yourself real

That they feel your love
Your devotion and protection
That they wait on your answers
To their burning questions

That they can find a confidence in waiting and leaning
And they check their thoughts for a higher meaning
You’re God in the good times
You’re God in the bad
And in this world my armor I’ll always be clad

So Satan take note
Satan take heed
My God comes to my rescue when 
I am in need

I’ve been given authority over you
Your final insult 
And such a coup

So give a shout for victory
For it will be mine
Worshiping now will consume 
Most of my time

Let us always remember
And never forget
That the battle was won
Even though we don’t feel it yet

When you’ve done everything
That you know to do
When the answers aren’t coming
And you feel you are through
Have faith that God always lends a hand
And my sweet beloved I just ask that you
STAND
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 3/19/2009 5:35:00 AM
wow-- this was so well done-- was going to stain it--but I can't just loved it Shoe-shine really--thought I read everything you wrote hmm?
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Date: 1/10/2009 6:39:00 PM
Excellent poem Laurie. True words spoken. I think I'll keep this one in my memory bank forever :-)
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Date: 12/28/2008 1:21:00 PM
This is wonderful, Laurie. It is true God answers our prayers in His own time and He does his will, not ours. The tough part is the waiting. Excellent write! Thank you for sharing your work and thoughtful comments Happy New Year and God bless! Love Robin
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Date: 12/28/2008 1:08:00 PM
An inspirational and feel good write. Verse that heralds truth and honesty. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Peace always, John
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Date: 12/6/2008 7:50:00 AM
A touch of the psalms here Laurie.especially verse 5.An outstanding stanza a poem within a poem.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 12/6/2008 7:34:00 AM
An emotionally powerful prayer. I could feel every word! I love the phrase "microwave prayers". ~Juliane
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Date: 12/6/2008 6:48:00 AM
What a wonderful, truthful prayer. One that reflects on what is important. Nicely done, Laurie, it shows your inner light! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/6/2008 5:43:00 AM
"I woiuld have to consider this the 'Perfect' write and hope and truth and prayer!"~"Good Morning Blessed & Beautiful Laurie Ginn!"~You are right among many fronts here dear lady~As Christ said in (John 16:33) "In the world you shall have many tribulations, but be of good cheer, for 'I' have overcome the world"~And He also said, "Blessed are those whom do not lose 'Faith' in Me"~I loved your soulful & sincere write here dear lady!~"You Have A Very Beautiful & Blessed Day~Love Always, John!:)
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