The Cavemens Journey
The cavemen family were moving
all was packed ready to go
their medicine man took the lead
heading off towards the mountains
A vast range lay to the west
blue against the setting sun
hunting as they travelled
carrying an ember in moss
It did not take long to start
a fire that blazed between the rocks
a spit of mammoth meat cooking above
juices running into the hissing fire
Settling down around it for the night
they snuggled together nerves on edge
startling at each snapping of a twig
feeling vulnerable out in the open
At dawn they push on as fast as possible
lush valleys in the foothills game aplenty
cliffs towered high over the landscape
there, over there said the medicine man
Sure enough a cave lay ahead mouth gaping
they approached with caution wary of bears
or a sabre toothed tiger both liked caves
they found it to be clear of all predators
One large chamber with several small ones
ideal for them some they had it to rights
a hole in the ceiling acting as a chimney
they set to work starting a cooking fire
Taking the ember from the moss bed
laying it on dried twigs and wool
blowing until flames licked up the wood
catching alight the bigger branches
The medicine man blessed the cave
while the healer saw to sore feet
and other ailments caused by travelling
soon they had settled into their new home
There was all they needed here at their feet
herbs to keep the tribe healthy and fit
animals for them to hunt with sling shot
most important of all they have each other
It is incredible that one simple word in this case SPARK
can lead to three poems I gave Rick the idea and he ran one way while
I took another route hope you all like our results
Copyright © Shadow Hamilton | Year Posted 2013
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