The Cave of Tears

She resides in a cave 
Made of her tears 
Only darkness there 
Smell of her tears everywhere 
I lighten the cave and 
Appealed her to get out 
Waiting there , expecting a miracle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Duncan Avatar
July 16, 2012 at 2:07 PM
very well written ,,,,, you have a great day ;}
Britt Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 4:17 PM
It be like that. This is a tough situation, JK. Very good one <3
Chakrapany Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 8:55 PM
thanks .jk
Palmer Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 9:54 AM
If you really want to help get in there sit,listen,encourage,pray and wait for the miracle,nice write Jay
Chakrapany Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 10:21 AM
thanks .jk
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