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The Cave Man

The dark dense Amazon, Gliding glittering river, The enchanting nature, My camera - the most lucky one, To get a first shot of nature at its peak, My footsteps drawn towards green, My eyes looked never down, Over the edge I stood, Just a line to fall, He caught me firm, We rolled down the rocks, Finally a glimpse of deep blue eyes, A tall majestic terrain with long strands He escalates from one branch to another, How swift, carrying me, A magic so quick, The vision of him in my eyes, Trees and skies sang on my ears, Before we could land, He landed in my heart, In a beautiful stone cave, At the verge of a waterfall, Scented breeze lovely flowers, A romantic night under stars, With full of love and gestures, I glanced him, A rustic wild kiss prolonged, A mesmerizing wedding in the dawn, Amidst the jungle roar, I married my Caveman, My name is Jane, And he The King of Apes ‘Tarzan’. 01 August, 2016 CAVES poetry contest

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Date: 8/4/2016 9:08:00 PM
Nice Imagery to be a bride of a cave man Wishing best for contest
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Date: 8/3/2016 11:32:00 AM
I sure enjoyed your creative and imaginative write, what female does not at some point, imagine Tarzan! i really liked spending time inside your poem ... CayCay
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Date: 8/1/2016 3:33:00 PM
Such a wonderful poetic tale that addresses the 'cave' theme, Madhupriya. Best wishes for the contest! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/1/2016 3:20:00 PM
Well weaved
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